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Jun 28, 2023Liked by Reina Cruz

The story is great. I can hardly wait to read more of it

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Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Second part is coming next week 😁

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Jun 28, 2023Liked by Reina Cruz

Really enjoyed the imaging of the neighborhood and the townspeople intro with the hints of secrets to come

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Thank you! I was attempting to really set the scene since the series is based on the setting. I'm glad to hear that it's coming through. Paul is my favorite of the neighbors. He has his own story later on in the series

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Interesting ways to gradually increase tension!

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Thank you!

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Jun 29, 2023Liked by Reina Cruz

I can't wait to read the rest!

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So happy to hear you enjoyed it!

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This was a terrifically spooky story cannot wait for part two!

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Thank you so much! Part 2 is coming out today

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