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Interesting concept!

But I felt that the more... flowery narration for some of events that were being described vaguely made it hard to read through at times. (This is subjective, of course.)

The part where the entity was about to control the man driving the car only to find that it had lost its power and the part it figured out that it could devour plant life first were well done!

Sorry, not sure if any of that was helpful, since this story has already been published in a book, and it's been nearly three years... 😅

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