Speculative Flash Fiction
This is great!
This is adorable!
I saw your post on the Fictionistas about this story. I really like it! Your writing is really sound on a technical level, your dialogue is lively between the main character and the child. Your prose is clear and concise. The kid's longing for the grandfather is very touching even within his petulant aloofness. Overall, very well done. There's really nothing to change here except to build upon the story, if that's your intention. If so, I'd love to read it!
The concept of an app capturing ghosts is wild but also like “yea, i can see that.” Enjoyed reading this story!